Sunday, November 21, 2010

Poetry for Today: Social Commentary

This is like a short, short story . . . possibly Poetic Prose, even. There is no rhyme or meter and the prose is not just "broken into little chunks," but rather broken to add drama to the story. It's not a story that resolves, but leaves the reader to form conclusions or wonder what happens next. It also presents a certain amount of social commentary which is, afterall, the poet's job. Let me make that very clear: The job of a poet is to offer social commentary and to cause people to think, or re-think what they take for granted. It is to move people out of complacency for which I have created an "edgy" quality; something that cuts. Here is my offering for you today.

What?

Margaret V. Doran

He slipped into bed and I smiled
snuggling into him
instantly I knew: he had been
with another woman;
since the day we started dating
all those years ago,
I had to forgo
perfume of any kind
because of his allergies.
But tonight he reeked of something
flowery, sensuous, intimidating.
And he wasn't sneezing or coughing.
He must have sensed the cold
he pulled back and peered at my
face there in the dim light
of the alarm clock
“What?” he demanded.

Saturday, November 6, 2010

Poetry for Today: Free Verse

Free verse follows no strict form; rhyming and meter are completely at the discretion of the poet as are length and number of lines. It is usually unmetered and unrhymed. My poem gives an example of "enjambment" which is quite popular in today's poetry. Unlike most traditional poetry, the lines do not provide "end stops," but rather flow from one to the next, transitioning a thought without stopping in much the same way that we think and day-dream.  There are no articles and a picture is painted in words, leaving the reader a lot of personal "room" for interpretation.

Ground Fog

Margaret V Doran

cloud lifts slowly, thin
horizontal layers drift
upwards, leave behind fields'
new growth, each blade gilt
mist coalesced: tiny silver orbs
hold, reflect, refract light
magnify, glorify dawn