Vacation
By Margaret V. Doran, June,
2013
No school
One quarter-moon
One comfy quilt
One folding table
Two ground pads
Two cotton curtains
Three giggly girls
No flashlight
One ten-striped June beetle . . . !!!
One table, one quilt, two pads, two
curtains, three girls
Vacate the lawn.
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First, the poem includes a modest amount of alliteration and it establishes a pattern for the verses: one line -0-, three lines -1-, two lines -2- and one line -3-. The pattern is obvious, particularly when it begins to repeat for the second verse. Then it suddenly breaks, providing a little humorous play on words for the last line. The best thing about this poem (for me) was that it prompted a flurry of poetry from three little girls who had confined themselves to the house temporarily and wrote acrostic poems.